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Re: The Darkness on my shore.
See the world that defies the light. Recluse, renounce what we call the core! Sing and laugh seeing this world of lore, that which heretics crave and sinners tore. Join ...
Jul 7, 2010 -
Re: I can see
No.
Sep 12, 2009 -
Re: I can see
Glad you liked it.
Jun 6, 2009 -
Re: I can see
Can you see the cause of pain? The beast that has made this stain.. the one that covers our society in vain. Wanting to make us fat with fast food ...
Jun 6, 2009 -
Re: I know why the caged one...
I liked the last stanza, how you related all the desperate struggles of the caged things to an author on his computer. Made everyone else writing on this website feel ...
Jun 6, 2009 -
Re: I know why the caged one...
I've taken your advice and done a little editing.
Jun 4, 2009 -
Re: I know why the caged one...
I know why the caged bird sings, It is the only thing that reminds of what it used to be. I know why the caged man cries, For every second ...
Jun 4, 2009 -
Re: Prelude to Despair pt1
Wassup guy. I like this poem. It reminds me of a friend that I know of. The rhyme is perfect as is the use of ye olde English words. I ...
Jan 14, 2009 -
Re: For my mind
Thanks for reviewing. I wrote this one fast as soon as it popped into my head, and didn't proofread. Correcting now. Also.. when you see pew.. Imagine the seats in ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: Rage the day
Nate, i appreciate your review.. I have proofread this, but I just didn't notice some of those things. I wrote this in the little spare time I have. I'll make ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: For my mind
So I've been there at a certain time. Sought my battles, spoke my mind Forced to disconnect the ties that bind For a tear I shed, only for my last ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: Darkness calls
This a poem that i created in my mind around Halloween, but forgot it until now. __________________________________________________________________________ In this hellish night, darkness calls. Moonl
Nov 21, 2008 -
Re: In My Dreams
Hi, I like this. My kind of poem. But one thing... Review powers, activate!! There it is, it finaly sees me. Finally. Small error, no biggie. pun or what? :lol: ...
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: For you I stand
Hi, you don't know me, but I know you. Or at least, I can see you through this window, in your room. Don't turn around. Review powers.. activate! These feelings ...
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: Death Threat to Prufrock
Cool poem. I liked it alot. Now for me to try my first review .. 8) there are another few who move too, I'm nor sure but it seems that ...
Nov 15, 2008
